498.The mountainous regions of northern Ethiopia are dotted with hundreds of manasteries,many of them chiseled from solid rock centuries ago. 这里为什么不用many of which are chiseled ? 如果改成which,那就是修饰manasteries,这里的意思应该是修饰regions吧?所以用独立主格结构了,them直接指代region。 507.Modern critics are amused by scholars' categorizing Tacitus's Germania as an ethnographic treatise. 这里categorizing是动名词明显不如动词categorize啊,改成scholars who categorize Tacitus's Germania as不是更好吗? 按照你的改法,cristic就是被scholar给amuse了,语义不通吧。 542.Oberlin College in Ohio was a renegade institution in deciding at its founding in 1833 to accept both men and women. 又是一个分词的题目,自己就总感觉分词有问题 when it was founded in 1833 for its decision to accept哪儿错了呢 decide优于desion,而且when分句好像位置不好,把for短语和修饰词隔开了。 522.Once the economic and social usefulness of the motor car was demonstrated its superiority over the horse prove, much of the early hostility to it in rural regions disappeared. demonstrate和prove重复了吧?删掉prove就好理解了。 799我觉得then可以这样用,表示俩个动作的先后。 -- by 会员 bigbigtongue (2010/2/26 23:42:32)
不同意498的说法,them本来就是指代m |