【求助GWD一道语法题！~】

水色青空 · 发表于 2010-2-21 11:50:58

As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A. As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B. As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C. Honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D. The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E. The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

答案在CE间有争议，个人的看法是：E的and前后貌似不平行？
还有就是不太清楚到底是谁result in ....?
想听听大家的看法，谢谢！~~~

清雨輕言 · 发表于 2010-2-21 12:59:54

怎么覺得這題應該選擇D呢

salasbond · 发表于 2010-2-21 13:28:11

As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A. As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B. As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C. Honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D. The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E. The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

是不是应该选C？还是选D啊？？？？？我的理由是A)是插入语位置不当，b）没有主句，c）and好像用的不对，e）with... 用的不好。

水色青空 · 发表于 2010-2-21 15:56:16

怎么覺得這題應該選擇D呢

-- by 会员清雨輕言 (2010/2/21 12:59:54)

D明显不对嘛，it 前面有honeybee和stinger，指代不清啊~~

水色青空 · 发表于 2010-2-21 15:58:30

As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A. As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B. As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C. Honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D. The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E. The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

是不是应该选C？还是选D啊？？？？？我的理由是A)是插入语位置不当，b）没有主句，c）and好像用的不对，e）with... 用的不好。

-- by 会员 salasbond (2010/2/21 13:28:11)

CE有争议啊，D中it前面有honeybee和stinger,指代不清
至于E。。。。。。貌似字典有with the result that的用法。。。。

C我就真的不知道了，总觉得那个AND要平行吧，但是没有平行，不知道赞成选C的童鞋理由是什么？？

Jennifer789 · 发表于 2010-2-22 15:05:25

这是新破解里的一道题答案是E
result 是前面整件事发出的并不是stinger发出的所以C不对

水色青空 · 发表于 2010-2-22 15:14:53

这是新破解里的一道题答案是E
result 是前面整件事发出的并不是stinger发出的所以C不对

-- by 会员 Jennifer789 (2010/2/22 15:05:25)

C的and前后貌似也不平行吧？

Jennifer789 · 发表于 2010-2-22 15:29:12

这是新破解里的一道题答案是E
result 是前面整件事发出的并不是stinger发出的所以C不对

-- by 会员 Jennifer789 (2010/2/22 15:05:25)

C的and前后貌似也不平行吧？

-- by 会员水色青空 (2010/2/22 15:14:53)

个人感觉C是平行的 heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted 这个是修饰前面的stinger，被动与主动把 maybe！！
C应该重点是错在逻辑不对

水色青空 · 发表于 2010-2-22 17:57:17

这是新破解里的一道题答案是E
result 是前面整件事发出的并不是stinger发出的所以C不对

-- by 会员 Jennifer789 (2010/2/22 15:05:25)

C的and前后貌似也不平行吧？

-- by 会员水色青空 (2010/2/22 15:14:53)

个人感觉C是平行的 heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted 这个是修饰前面的stinger，被动与主动把 maybe！！
C应该重点是错在逻辑不对

-- by 会员 Jennifer789 (2010/2/22 15:29:12)

恩，明白了，感谢回答！~~~

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