请大家给点意见，关于essay写作的问题

kevinboochu · 发表于 2010-1-9 06:48:55

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caopp · 发表于 2010-1-9 06:54:31

clearly state your throught, link it to why you choose it and what have you prepared to qualify that goal.

静雨jy · 发表于 2010-1-9 10:56:11

我于两年前申请了一次，当时被拒，现在重新来过。两年前申请的时候我的longterm goal写的是今后想要在supply chain方向发展，尽管我的本科专业和工作经历都是金融方向。当时是因为我申请的学校Supplychain很好，所以觉得这样写比较有说服力。这次重新申请，我想还是改回finance方向，因为我的经历和本科专业都是这个。可是又担心学校那边觉得我的目标不清晰，不知道现在该怎么办，请大家给点意见！谢谢了！！

-- by 会员 kevinboochu (2010/1/9 6:48:55)

觉得主要还是要说服学校你为什么选择这个发展方向,让人觉得可信而且是经过认真思考和计划的就行吧

doucevoyage · 发表于 2010-1-18 07:28:40

Don't try to tell what they want to hear, instead tell them what you really want to do. Link the resources they offer to what you want to do, justify why their school is a good choice.

Admission people read thousands of applications a year, and they're not rookies, they can easily spot your desperate attempt. So be yourself, and convince them you're the right choice.

请大家给点意见，关于essay写作的问题

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