Argument 思路征求

zscsl · 发表于 2009-11-29 23:46:38

题库第一篇。。我觉得范文的思路不好。。好.像不是最好的驳论理由。。大家有没有什么好一点思路呢。。。中文的哟。。

Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they beconme more efficient.In color firm processing, for example, the cost of a 3-by-5inch print fell from 50 cents for five day service in 1970 to 20 cents for one-day service in 1984. The same principle applies to the processing of foodAnd since Olympic Foods will soon celebrate its 25th birthday, we can expect that our long experience will enable us to minimize costs and thus maximaize profits

lorrain_cc · 发表于 2009-11-30 04:15:21

1.false analogy,就是color firm processing-processing of food...
2.25周年生日-long experience(并且是有帮助的经验),25周年就是经验长,经验丰富?可能公司一直就是得过且过,勉强维持而已,根本没有积累什么经验..
3.minimize costs=maximaize profits..最小化成本了,就能最大化利润?,成本是减少了,但什么偷工减料啊,这样的减少成本,怎么能使利润最大化??

= =!,这题我一直觉得很奇怪的,25岁生日,怎么就能expect后面一系列的东西= =

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