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Topic o you agree or disagree with the folloing statement?  arents are the best teachers. Use specific resons and examples to support your answer.
In people's whole life, there're veriaty（variety) of acknowlages(knowledge) about family, work, love and life itself, we have to learn. Besides teachers in school, we learn from different people around us, such as parents, friends, sisters or brothers, colleagues, even a stranger just passed by in the street. In this kind of situation, we can respect people who we learn from as "teacher".
Among these teachers metioned above, who's the best one? For me, the answer is obviously Parents. Furthermore, I convice (believe) that most people will make the same choice. But why?
The reasons(reason) for me is clearly present by itself. Parents are the first teachers in our life. And more important is they take the teaching responsibility during our childhood, the crucial period when our characteristics and pesonalites (personalities) shaping and fixing. These traits influent(influence) on our life when we grew up and definitely decide who we are. In my personal experience, my parents, esp. my father did a good job to teach me how to face the failures and frustracture (frustrations).It was in my 8 years old, I loss a table tennis game in the final turn and thought I would never play this game in the rest of my life. It was my dad, he invited me to play basketball with him and loss it intentionally (intentionally). When I felt better, he told me, "e(E)ither table tennis or basketball is just a game, there's only one winner but many lossers(losers) in any game, how could you ask for everyone as the winner? So, the important thing is you enjoy it, you play it." It seems so simple when I grew up and went through so many failures, but at that time, I found I really love this game and failure in once game was just a piece of cake! Now, dad's words always appear in my mind, whenever the hard time comes to (befall/ strike) me. In (In the light of) this views(view), parents are teachers who guide our life.
I emphasis on parents as the best teachers, however, wouldn't minor (play down/depreciate/belittle) other teachers' role in our complicated(complicated) and comprehensive living. Such as we learn science from tutors, learn friendship from our intimate partners, even our rivals could be the good teacher for our success in competitions. But, can you find anyone would teach you everything s/he got without any reward? Only Parents!
自己用word检查了下，共有10多处拼写等小错误（上面括号处），时间没控制好，超了，字数也写多了（399字，word统计），我有生以来第一篇toefl习作，望各位指点如何调整思路和写作结构。 |
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