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发表于 2009-11-21 22:26:55 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
18. GWD17-Q18:
Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
A.Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
B.Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.
C.With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
D.The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
E.Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.
这道 题目C错有人说是因为 WITH修饰THE AVERAGE OUTPUT 逻辑主语错误 但是我做过有WITH不修饰逻辑主语的 但是确是对的
og152. When the technique known as gene-splicing was invented in the early 1970's, it was feared that scien­tists might inadvertently create an "Andromeda strain," a microbe never before seen on Earth that might escape from the laboratory and it would kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it.  

(A)  
it would kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it  

(B)  
it might kill vast numbers of humans with no natural defenses against it  

(C)  kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it


(D)
kill vast numbers of humans who have no natu­ral defenses against them  

(E)  kill vast numbers of humans with no natural defenses against them


这里with修饰没有歧义,但是限定修饰却出现问题。这里应该用who才对


2with前面有逗号,就不一定修饰谁了,尤其是在句尾一定小心。所以出现with谨慎一下好
 

但是这道题就不会歧义


179. During the early years of European settlement on a continent that was viewed as "wilderness" by the newcomers. Native Americans, intimately knowing the ecology of the land. were a help in the rescuing of many Pilgrims and pioneers from hardship, or even death.  

(A)  
Native Americans, intimately knowing the ecology of the land, were a help in the rescuing of  

(B)  
Native Americans knew the ecology and the land intimately and this enabled them to help in the rescue of  

(C)  Native Americans, with their intimate knowledge of the ecology of the land, helped to rescue


(D)having intimate knowledge of the ecology of the land. Native Americans helped the rescue of


(E)  
knowing intimately the ecology of the land, Native Americans helped to rescue  

with只能修饰NA


   




GWD-9-Q3:

       Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.

GWD-9-Q3:

       Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.
  • Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people




  • As the cost of wireless service plummeted in the last year and as mobile phones became increasingly common, many people




  • In the last year, with the cost of wireless service plummeting, and mobile phones have become increasingly common, there are many people




  • With the cost of wireless service plummeting in the last year and mobile phones becoming increasingly common, many people are




  • While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are






D  

WITH就是表伴随 的

GWD4-Q31:6-31

      The fact of some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably on a spectrum of genetic relatedness.



The fact of some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably

That some fraternal twins resemble each other greatly while others look quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely that they vary considerably

With some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar, it highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely considerable variation

With some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar, it is a fact that highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely a considerable variation

Because some fraternal twins resemble each other greatly and others look quite dissimilar, this fact highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably



B

With 伴随状语不能修饰it

那么这道题目为什么又说不能修饰IT呢 不能说是伴随状语吗
谢谢耐心看完的 CDER
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-22 11:07:53 | 只看该作者
顶一下 牛牛来呀~~
板凳
发表于 2009-11-22 11:59:29 | 只看该作者
lz能重新编辑下么,看得眼花
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-22 12:26:42 | 只看该作者
编了下 你看看这样行吗
5#
发表于 2009-11-22 12:55:54 | 只看该作者
GWD17-Q18:
C.With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
个人认为这里不好在with后面用了个所有格+being的被动态结构,GMAT里面一般看到这种结构就pass的吧。
另外用with一般都表示伴随等,削弱了原句想强调原因的意图。

GWD4-Q31
简化就是 “xxx的现象 highlights a feature”
用with表伴随,把伴随成分拿掉不看的话,那么it就缺少指代对象了。
如果说with用来修饰it,那么it指代这个with短语也不对头。
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-22 18:48:43 | 只看该作者
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