语法885套题 SectionE-8

mylittlebird · 发表于 2010-8-5 01:36:59

8. Among the emotions on display in the negotiating room （were anger for repeatedly raising the issue over and over again and preventing the raw wounds from earlier battles from ever beginning to heal.）
(A) were anger for repeatedly raising the issue over and over again and preventing the raw wounds from earlier battles from ever beginning to heal
(B) was anger for repeatedly raising the issue and preventing the raw wounds from earlier battles from ever beginning to heal
(C) were anger over repeatedly raising the issue and preventing the raw wounds from earlier battles to begin healing
(D) was anger about the issue, which was raised over and over, and preventing the wounds from earlier battles, still raw, to begin healing
(E) were anger about the issue, which was raised repeatedly, and preventing the raw wounds from earlier battles to begin to heal
答案是B，我选的是D。不明白为什么选B。请高人指点！多谢！

pansean · 发表于 2010-8-5 02:16:33

我觉得最主要问题是and后的分词短语和and前面无论是anger或者是issue都不能构成并列，语法和逻辑上都错误，among the emotions was anger and preventing xxx./ among the emotions was anger about the issue and preventing...
另外，which was raised over and over比起repeatedly，显得罗嗦；still raw作插入语也有问题...

mylittlebird · 发表于 2010-8-7 08:27:34

并列是有比较大的问题。多谢！

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