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楼主
发表于 2005-7-8 14:22:00 | 只看该作者

我把我的摸版贴出来好了

题目是PALYING GAMES TEACHES US ABOUT LIFE


Whether.......is an interesting topic because different people hole different opinions due to their distinct experiences and backgrounds. There are some people think..., but others prefer the opposite. If I were faced with this issue, I would like to say it is more suitable to choose..... There are many persuasive reasons why I choose this statement, now I will only explore a few of the most important ones.


First of all, the reason can be presented to develop my point is that...... Facts witness and present many examples. ....... I think there are no better examples than this one to demonstrate my view more clearly.


In the second place, anther persuasive reason is that.......... For example..... If you can see that you can understand it more deeply.


Surely, there is no denying that (说点缺点, 再举个例子)。 However, this alone does not lend any strong support to weaken what I have supported. When the disadvantages and advantages are carefuly compared, the most striking conclusion is obvious.


Taking into account all these factors discussed above, which sometimes can intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive. We can comfortably reach the conclusion that ....... In fact only do I prefer to .....but also prefer to.....(建议)

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2005-7-8 14:28:00 | 只看该作者
我就是拿这个摸版拿6分的(改动REPASSION 前辈的)
板凳
发表于 2005-7-8 14:46:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢楼主



呵呵


地板
发表于 2005-7-8 15:50:00 | 只看该作者
thank you for sharing
5#
发表于 2005-7-8 16:12:00 | 只看该作者

这样的模板会误人子弟。其实写作并不难,用功练习一下,一两周就够了,何必套这种东西,一点真功夫也学不到?

6#
 楼主| 发表于 2005-7-8 17:11:00 | 只看该作者

呵呵,被骂了~~

7#
发表于 2005-7-8 18:01:00 | 只看该作者

其实还是一句话..信者灵..不信者不灵....大家学习方法不一样..


感谢楼主无私分享


8#
发表于 2005-7-9 02:32:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢楼主分享,祝取得理想成绩!


9#
发表于 2005-7-9 05:39:00 | 只看该作者
thank you very much!
10#
发表于 2005-7-9 07:50:00 | 只看该作者
thanks for sharing
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