11。★★★ Japanese researchers are producing a series of robots that can identify human facial expressions, to which they will then respond; their goal is primarily creating a robot that will empathize with us.
(A) expressions, to which they will then respond; their goal is primarily creating (B) expressions, then responding to them; primarily to create (C) expressions and then respond to them; the researchers' primary goal is to create (D) expressions as well as giving a response to them; their primary goal is creation of (E) expressions and responding to them; primarily, the researchers' goal is creating 【考点】 惯用语(Diction/Idiom) ※句子结构(Grammatical Construction)、指代一致(Consistency) 1) 指代歧义; 一般来说避免指代歧义的方法有三个: a)重复代词指代的对象 b)用such + n.或者指示代词this/these/those + n.代替代词 c)用一个名词概括代词指代的物件
2) 介系词结构也需要概念对等:for example: A is B。 这个句子中A,B概念要对等。例如本题goal is to create中的goal只能跟to do结构概念对等,因为“目标”只能是去做某事(to do) 3) 分号前后必须连接完整的句子 (A) 第二个分句中的their在逻辑意思上应该指代researchers,与前面出现的代词they指代对象不一致; goal和creating概念不对等; primarily修饰creating,逻辑意思错误 (B) 分号后面不是一个完整的句子;then是副词,不能连接句子,应该改为and then (C) 正确, and then respond和can identify平行;重复the researcher消除了指代歧义;goal和to do概念对等 (D) giving没有平衡的对象,且使用give a response不如直接用动词respond简洁有效;goal和creation概念不对等,“目标”只能是去做某事,而不可能是一个名词“creation” (E) responding没有平衡的物件;primarily位置错误,置于句首则修饰整个句子; goal和creating概念不对等 ※句子结构: Japanese researchers are producing … that can identify…and then respond…;the…goal is to…
我的问题是 as well as 是否需要两边无论是n,还是ving都要平行,对等阿? 大家有没有一个印象,有个例句是: she sings as well as dancing. 求助大牛
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