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楼主
发表于 2008-8-21 18:07:00 | 只看该作者

请教NN一个问题

The discovery that Earth's inner core rotates independently of and more quickly than Eath's ouer layers is responsible for advancing studies of the flow of heat from the inner through the outer planet and of the formation and periodic reversal in direction of Earth's magnetic field.

A.core rotates independently of and more quickly than Eath's ouer layers is responsible for advancing studies of the flow of heat from the inner through the outer planet and of the formation and periodic reversal in direction of Earth's magnetic field.

B.core rotates independently of and more quickly than Eath's ouer layers is responsible for advancing studies of how heat from the inner core flows through the outer palnet and the formation and periodic reversal in direction of Earth's magnetic field.

为什么选A不选B呢?是因为B中formation前没有of么?还是B的表达不好?

请高手指教!!

谢谢!~~

沙发
发表于 2008-8-21 20:13:00 | 只看该作者

不是B中的 FORMATION不对,A也有它啊。

个人认为,因为B中有HOW,而原文的意思没有HOW怎么样怎么样,所以不忠实原文。A更为贴切!~

 

板凳
发表于 2008-8-21 21:40:00 | 只看该作者

主要是因为平行结构。

这是一个“advancing study of +n1 and (advancing study) of + n2”的结构

of 也很关键,因为如果没有of,就会产生歧义,看不出来and 后面的"periodic reversal in direction of ..."是和"how heat from....flows through ..."平行,还是跟“the formation”平行。你看B里面后半部分连着有两个and,却是连接着不同层次的对象,这种结构应当避免。

地板
发表于 2008-8-21 22:32:00 | 只看该作者

  

平行结构是个大问题!~

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-8-22 13:09:00 | 只看该作者
原来如此,谢谢谢谢!!
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