1. Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial such as when each of the three major networks broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate. (A) superficial such as when each of the three major networks (B) superficial, as can sometimes occur if all of the three major networks (C) superficial if the three major networks all (D) superficial whenever each of the three major networks(E) (E) superficial, as when the three major networks each
(A)each of+复名 +单谓,划线后broadcast,错。such as应该表举例,一般前面需逗号。 (B)fregments。 (C)大全注释上解释为:C, if句意不对。变成了,只有if成立,结论才成立。 查LDOCE:if,1used when talking about something that might happen or be true, or might have happened。就是引导条件状语从句,when只能引导时间状语从句?虽然感觉改if的确逻辑关系改变了,但是感觉没找到根据。
(D)whenever原文未表达这个意思。主谓不一致
(E)大全注释:best. 1)as when as和when分开理解比较好,as 作连词, when引导一个壮语从句,意思合起来理解就相当于:such as when。 “就像(诸如)当….的时候”, 总之是具体说明前面的描述(television can be superficial)在什么情况下可以体现. 2) 复数名词作主语+each, 谓语动词仍用复数。
疑问:as做连词没错,when也是连词引导状从,一个分句两个连词?还是as when就是个固定用法,抑或可以这么用?至于一定要说as when可以这么用,那意思肯定很明确,就是原文想表达的意思。当。。时候。
C, if句意不对。变成了,只有if成立,结论才成立。 查LDOCE:if,1used when talking about something that might happen or be true, or might have happened。就是引导条件状语从句,when只能引导时间状语从句?虽然感觉改if的确逻辑关系改变了,但是感觉没找到根据。
(D)whenever原文未表达这个意思。主谓不一致
(E)大全注释:best. 1)as when as和when分开理解比较好,as 作连词, when引导一个壮语从句,意思合起来理解就相当于:such as when。 “就像(诸如)当….的时候”, 总之是具体说明前面的描述(television can be superficial)在什么情况下可以体现. 2) 复数名词作主语+each, 谓语动词仍用复数。
疑问:as做连词没错,when也是连词引导状从,一个分句两个连词?还是as when就是个固定用法,抑或可以这么用?至于一定要说as when可以这么用,那意思肯定很明确,就是原文想表达的意思。当。。时候。
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