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楼主
发表于 2008-7-28 16:37:00 | 只看该作者

关于平行结构

OG152 关于平行结构

When the technique known as gene-splicing was invented in the early 1970's, it was feared that scien­tists might inadvertently create an "Andromeda strain," a microbe never before seen on Earth that might escape from the laboratory and it would kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it.

(A) it would kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it

(B)
     it might kill vast numbers of humans with no natural defenses against it

(C) kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it

(D) kill vast numbers of humans who have no natu­ral defenses against them

(E) kill vast numbers of humans with no natural
    defenses against them

This sentence requires parallel verb forms within the relative clause that might escape... and kill. C, the best choice, uses parallel verb forms that are followed appropriately by the conditional would have in the who clause that modifies humans. Choices A and B each violate parallel construction by intro­ducing a new independent clause, it would kill... and it might kill... Though choices D and E begin by observing parallel­ism, the use of them at the end of each creates a problem of pronoun reference: them cannot refer to the singular microbe. In addition, choices B, D, and E lack would and thus do not express the conditional.

答案说AB因为加了it而成了两句话(Choices A and B each violate parallel construction by intro­ducing a new independent clause) 犯了平行结构的错误。我有个疑问,这里为什么不能成为两句话?it 指代a microbe 。

might和would没有区别么?我做的时候见是情态动词就没敢省略,麻烦好心人帮忙看看

 谢谢


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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-28 18:04:00 | 只看该作者
顶以下
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-31 19:51:00 | 只看该作者

怎么都没人看啊

地板
发表于 2008-7-31 20:32:00 | 只看该作者

When the technique known as gene-splicing was invented in the early 1970's, it was feared that scien­tists might inadvertently create an "Andromeda strain," a microbe never before seen on Earth that might escape from the laboratory and it would kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it.
        

分析下句子: When从句 +  主句 it was feared that ......  an "Andromeda strain' +  同位语 a microbe + that 定语从句 

When the technique 从主 (known as gene-splicing) 修饰technique  was invented  从谓 (in the early 1970's ),  [it was feared that scientists might inadvertently create  an "Andromeda strain" ]  主句  , a microbe  (做 an Andromeda strain同位语) <never before seen on Earth> 修饰 microbe [ that might escape from the laboratory and it would kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it. ] 这一串是that 引导的定语从句,修饰a microbe, that直代 a microbe, 在丛句中作主语, 然后,

incorrect:  might escape from the laboratory and it would kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it.

如果用it, 就打破平行了

correct : might escape from the laboratory and kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it (it 指代 a microbe,所以单数,不是them)

and 并列结构前后平行

(A) it would kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it

(B)
     it might kill vast numbers of humans with no natural defenses against it

(C) kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it  (正确)

(D) kill vast numbers of humans who have no natu­ral defenses against them

(E) kill vast numbers of humans with no natural
    defenses against them

以上是仅代表个人想法,如果有问题,大家要严厉指出阿~~~ 谢谢~~

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发表于 2008-7-31 23:34:00 | 只看该作者
a microbe never before seen on Earth that might escape from the laboratory and it would kill vast numbers of humans who would have no natural defenses against it.
同上。。
这个部分是平行的,而且前面是个逗号,后面就不应该有非从句的句子出现了 escape 跟kill是并列的
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