以下是引用terry_tin在2003-5-19 12:19:00的发言：OG No.15 In his research paper, Dr. Frosh,medical director of the Payne Whitney Clinic, distinguishes (mood swings, which may be violent without their being grounded in mental disease, from genuine manic-depressive psychosis.) B. mood swings, perhaps violent without being grounded in mental disease, and genuine manic-depressive psychosis. C. between mood swings ,which may be violent without being grounded in mental disease, and genuine manic-depressive psychosis. D. between mood swings, perhaps violent without being grounded in mental disease, from genuine manic-depressive psychosis. E. genuine manic-depressive psychosis and mood swings,which may be violent without being grounded in mental disease. The answer is C. OG中说B中perhaps violent is awkward and less clear thanC中which may be violent,为什么呢?我觉得好像两个的表达的意思都应该是一样的啊!也就是说如果B中加上between的话,为什么还是应该选C呢? 什么是把握一种表达是不是awkward或者是否clear的标准呢? 
情态动词要保持，c 保持了 原文的may， 而 b 中把may 换成 perhaps ，犯了effectiveness错误。
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