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PREP SC新版破解1 230(GWD 8 Q32) 看过讨论后仍有一点疑问,谢谢大家

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发表于 2010-3-28 21:56:28 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for the company’s powerful microprocessor chip.

A. including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for

B. which includes the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of

C. included among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as a decline in sales for

D. among them the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of

E. among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in sales for





答案选择D。



2.个人觉得,如果B改成which include the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of


或者A改成including the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for

是不是也可以?

3.declining sales of 和 for 有关系么。。。




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 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-28 21:56:57 | 只看该作者
下面是之前找到的讨论内容。。不过没有涉及到我的问题。。



among them the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of  the company’s powerful microprocessor chip.
后半句是独立主格的一种用法(Nominative Absolute Construction)
即 ‘名词+介词短语’做独立主格
但由于名词部分过长,因而独立主格结构中又使用了倒装,把among them提到了前面,them指代numerous challenges.



D答案还原后 sales of  the company’s powerful microprocessor chip,不是犯了of + 所有格的大忌了吗?白勇和PREP语法笔记都提到这种形式是错误的

-》如果是sales of  the company’s ,说公司的销售,那就错了
但这里是sales of  the company’s powerful microprocessor chip,说的是公司的chip的销售,对的



朗曼解释

                       among other things/places/factors etc
           used to say that you are only mentioning one or two people or things out of a much larger group:

At the meeting they discussed, among other things, recent events in Japan.
板凳
发表于 2010-4-5 22:32:28 | 只看该作者
230.(28772-!-item-!-188;#058&003200)(GWD-8-Q32)



At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for the company’s powerful microprocessor chip.

A. including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for

B. which includes the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of

C. included among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as a decline in sales for

D. among them the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of

E. among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in sales for





答案选择D。



2.个人觉得,如果B改成which include the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of


或者A改成including the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for

是不是也可以?

3.declining sales of 和 for 有关系么。。。




-- by 会员 fay009 (2010/3/28 21:56:28)


改了还是不对
B中的which容易让人误认为是指代之前的company的,造成歧义
且 threat 的固定搭配应该为the threat of sth. 或者the threat from sb.所以这里的from也错
sale的搭配应该是of而不是for
地板
发表于 2010-9-19 21:43:59 | 只看该作者
1,正确的习语是 sales of 而不是 sales for
2,B中的the threat of 和 declining sales 不平行对称,一个是threat一个是sales,逻辑不对,正确选项应该是the threat of  和 the decline in
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发表于 2017-4-15 16:11:13 | 只看该作者
A        Including 只能作为介词
Including 与among them 重复
B        Which 跳跃修饰challenges 单复数不对
AB语义也不对 挑战包括威胁和下降
并不是威胁和销售
C        Including 与among them 重复
included错误 是主动地包括
D        倒装的独立主格
The threat and the decline among them
E        These 不要单独使用
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