230.(28772-!-item-!-188;#058&003200)(GWD-8-Q32)
At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for the company’s powerful microprocessor chip.
A. including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
B. which includes the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of
C. included among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as a decline in sales for
D. among them the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of
E. among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in sales for
答案选择D。
2.个人觉得,如果B改成which include the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of
或者A改成including the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
是不是也可以?
3.declining sales of 和 for 有关系么。。。
-- by 会员 fay009 (2010/3/28 21:56:28)
改了还是不对 B中的which容易让人误认为是指代之前的company的,造成歧义 且 threat 的固定搭配应该为the threat of sth. 或者the threat from sb.所以这里的from也错 sale的搭配应该是of而不是for |