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Community is our home,which needs us great efforts to maintain it.I am proud of take a role to serve my community and do my best to improve it.Nothing could compare with the individual in the society and an improvement of sporting infrastructure aiming to citizens' health,friends making and a wide view of world is of significant importance above all.A bicycle traveling course will be in the consideration.

In the first place,a bicycle riding for several times a week could evidently have an increase benefit for healthy.through the exercise,people in bad health will suffer less,elders are able to be in good condition and higher metabolism ratio,and children will have minimal opportunity to get ill.the habitants in our community will be undoubtful to have a excellent physical condition by this course.

in the second one,making friends as one of the major component of people's life is in the major list of one's must-do matters.By virtue of human's gregarious character,the isolation of individuals apparently unbearable.For most of us,a community is set up to communicate with others.By attending our bicycle traveling course,more people will be access to you.Those who varies in thoughts and interests will allow you to get a better understanding of others.and statistics shows that friends making will also lead a low proportion for people to drop into isolation and depression.

in the final analysis,much of the places in your city or even outside will be available to you ,which enlarges your knowledge to your live place.a person,for instance,was used to live in a community with fairly no contact,whose world involves nothing but home and  school.The lacking of outside world connection totally seperated him from others and it became a challenge to him to get through not only place but also people strange. as a result, he was molded in an odd guy with little view of the globe.I don't want that kind of persons existed in my community.the program will make it at no rate.

thus, the bicycle traveling program will be fascinate to enhance the living standard of my community.and i regard it will be accepted by the public and every one will appreciate that certainly.

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发现很多首字母都没有大写. 还有一句话之间要空格的.

我也在积极准备IBT. 今天写了第一篇文章 呵呵 一会儿也发出来请别人拍 呵呵

我觉得要修改的貌似不少... 我只能尝试改第一段了...