1. Framed by traitorous colleagues, Alfred Dreyfus was imprisoned for twelve years before there was exoneration and his freedom.
(A) there was exoneration and his freedom
(B) he was to be exonerated with freedom
(C) being exonerated and freed
(D) exoneration and his freedom(C)
(E) being freed, having been exonerated
请问为何D不可啊?
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逻辑上不能说:一个人在赦免和他的自由前被关了12年。
另外, D没有被动关系, 既没有表达出他是被别人赦免释放的。
许多高手说:尽量用动词形式不用名词形式, efficiency.
新手上路, 多指教。
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