以下是引用Fadaway在2008-3-8 21:21:00的发言:
Retail sales rose 8/10 of 1 percent in August, intensifying expectations that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of the 1.4 percent growth rate in personal spending for the previous quarter. A. that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of - expectation意味着后面的是还没有发生的事情,而过去时表示已经发生的,不恰当。另外,that of 没有可以指代的对象
B. that personal spending in the July-September quarter would more than double C. of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it more than doubled D. of personal spending in the July-September quarter, more than doubling that of E. of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it would more than double that of - 同上,另外,that it would more than... is wordy and illogical
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