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92. Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Once in a newspaper, I hit upon a report that an increasing number of young people enjoy living in places that have the same weather all year long. They argue that it feels more comfortable living a place like this. As far as I am concerned, even though life is a lot simpler without too many changes in climate, it can not compete with the advantages of living in the areas where the weather changes several times a year.

Admittedly, economically speaking, living in the places that have the same climate, a lot of money could be saved, such as money spent on changing clothes. Besides, it also cost much to keep the home warm in winters and make work places cool in summers. However, numerous though advantages living in the places with the same weather are, they can not compare with the benefits that living in the weather-changing places brings about when the following reasons are taken into consideration.

In the first place, living in the areas where the weather changes every year, people can enjoy different scenes in different times, such as, the snow in winter, the rainfall in summer, the bloom in spring, and the leaves changing color in autumn. It gives us a chance to take pretty photos. Also, for people who want to adapt a healthy life style, enjoying these beauties would help them to reduce stress and feel happy. So if one wants to have a delight mood, the choice would be living in the place where we can enjoy four-season outlook. 

Furthermore, people could do many interesting things in different weather. Girls could wear different kinds of outfits in different seasons, which could give them different beauties, such as, dressing in skirts in summer and wearing boots in autumn. Only in countries with this kind of climate, can girls enjoy different fashion styles. Moreover, people can do different exercises in the places have four seasons every year. For example, my brother extremely enjoys skating in winter. Hardly could we imagine that how he do his favorite sports in tropical areas. So this is another advantage, which the places with same climate all year long do not have.   

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that living in the places have different weather every year is far better than living in those with no climate changing.

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Once in a newspaper, I hit upon a report that an increasing number of young people enjoy living in places that have the same weather all year long. They argue that it feels more comfortable living a place like this（这里this是想指代places that have the same weather all year long的吧，但第一眼看不太明显，建议说清楚）. As far as I am concerned, even though life is a lot（貌似我的高中老师说不要用a lot修饰比较级，建议用far） simpler without too many changes in climate, it can not compete with the advantages of living in the areas where the weather changes several times a year.

Once in a newspaper, I hit upon a report that(If you just describet the fact itself, it would be better, not only because it does not introduce any egoism to the writing, but also because it gives an impression that the fact was known by most people, not just the writer him/herself) . According to a recent survey, an increasing number of young people enjoy living in places that have the same weather all year long. They argue that it feels more comfortable living a place like this. (until now the introduction for the opening statement is good.)As far as I am concerned, even though life is a lot simpler without too many changes in climate, it can not compete with the advantages(what advantages, i need to know those right now, for example, you can add the key words of your supporting ideas) of living in the areas where the weather changes several times a year.

(this section should be deleted. if you want to keep it, make some corrections as follows and move to right before conclusion section.) Admittedly, economically speaking,(some people may counter that) living in the places that have the same climate, a lot of money could be saved, such as money spent on changing clothes. Besides, it also cost much to keep the home warm in winters and make work places cool in summers. However, numerous though advantages living in the places with the same weather are, they can not compare with the benefits that living in the weather-changing places brings about when the following reasons are taken into consideration. (the writing can give some counter-examples such as living close to equation/pole is more of spending money) 

In the first place, living in the areas where the weather changes every year, people can enjoy different scenes in different times, such as, the snow in winter, the rainfall in summer, the bloom in spring, and the leaves changing color in autumn.(too chinglish, because whenver americans exemplify sth, they just use 2/3 examples. More than 3 examples are more likely from Chinese 排比句. The other thing is if you put all examples in a main sentence, you'd have to develop all of them in the following paragraphs. In this case you d better add another sentence right before as a key sentence) It gives us a chance to take pretty photos. Also, for people who want to adapt a healthy life style, enjoying these beauties would help them to reduce stress and feel happy. So if one wants to have a delight mood, the choice would be living in the place where we can enjoy four-season outlook. (lack of good reasoning. I mean in this part, the writer talked about photo, heathy life style, stress, happy, delight mood, outlook. just focus on a few. otherwise the writer makes it scattered in terms of main theme. )