The global-warming effect of ocean white caps are one of the many aspects of the ocean environment that are not yet incorporated in any detail into the computer models used for predicting how rising greenhouse gas concentrations could affect climate.
The global-warming effect of ocean white caps are one of the many aspects of the ocean environment that are not yet incorporated in any detail into the computer models used for predicting how rising greenhouse gas concentrations could affect climate.
The global-warming effect of ocean white caps are one of the many aspects of the ocean environment that are not yet incorporated in any detail into the computer models used for predicting
The effect on global warming of ocean white caps are one of the many aspects of the ocean environment not yet incorporated in any detail into computer models, which they use to predict
The effect of ocean white caps on global warming is one of the many aspects of the ocean environment that are not yet incorporated in any detail into the computer models used to predict
That ocean white caps have an effect on global warming is one of the many aspects of the ocean environment not yet having been incorporated in any detail into the computer models that are used for predicting
That ocean white caps have an effect on global warming is one of the many aspects of the ocean environment not yet being incorporated in any detail into computer models, which they use to predict
D至少有两处不足:1,是影响(effect),而不是有影响这件事(that引导的主语从句),是一个未被加入模型的因素;2,Idiom:be used to do sth.而不是 be used for doing sth.。
A of B that-clause结构中,没有见到有语法说“that从句必须修饰A或必须修饰B”。
时态:如果句子是the ocean environment that not yet have been incorporated....,个人认为完成时正确,但是直接用分词形式:having been incorporated,不好,因为在OG经常强调Ving表示正在进行和发生,句子表述的是一个事实(从过去延续到现在),而不是一个正在发生的动作。两者不一样,LZ可以体会下。