请教两道题 885-16-7 & 885-16-20！！！

halcyon · 发表于 2004-1-6 23:32:00

7. A prolific architect who worked from the turn of the century until the late 1950’s, Julia Morgan designed nearly 800 buildings in California, perhaps most notably William Randolph Hearst’s monumental estate at San Simeon.
(A) Julia Morgan designed nearly 800 buildings in California, perhaps most notably William Randolph Hearst’s monumental estate at San Simeon
(B) perhaps the most notable of the nearly 800 buildings in California designed by Julia Morgan was William Randolph Hearst’s monumental estate at San Simeon
(C) of the nearly 800 buildings in California designed by Julia Morgan, perhaps the most notable was William Randolph Hearst’s monumental estate at San Simeon
(D) nearly 800 buildings in California were designed by Julia Morgan, of which William Randolph Hearst’s monumental estate at San Simeon is perhaps the most notable
(E) William Randolph Hearst’s monumental estate at San Simeon is perhaps the most notable of the nearly 800 buildings in California designed by Julia Morgan

请问 a 中 most notably 是什么语法成分

20. According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which has already been approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.
(A) According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which has already been approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.
(B) Already approaching 19 pounds a year in the United States, the National Pasta Association predicts that per-capita consumption of pasta will reach 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.
(C) The National Pasta association predicts by the twenty-first century that per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which is already approaching 19 pounds a year, will reach 30 pounds a year.
(D) By the twenty-first century, the National Pasta Association predicts that per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, having already approached 19 pounds a year, will reach 30 pounds a year.
(E) According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States is already approaching 19 pounds a year and will reach 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.

为什么 a 错？

flora_wang · 发表于 2004-1-7 09:56:00

两题偶都对了不过你那第一个问题偶真被问傻了
好象是是修饰designed
想了一想, 又查了些资料:
The association with the Hearst family began in 1902, when Morgan received a commission to complete Phoebe Hearst’s large hacienda at Pleasanton, California. Morgan’s first major commission from W. R. Hearst was for the Examiner Building (1915) in Los Angeles, which she designed to resemble Spanish missions in California. In 1919 Hearst hired her to design the main residence and guesthouses for his hilltop ranch near San Simeon. For the next 28 years she supervised all details of the 165-room Spanish-style Hearst castle and the 127 acres of gardens, pools, cottages, and terraces that form a hillside village around it.

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第二题偶看是出问题在achieve上头
achieve: to succeed in doing sth good or geting the result you wanted, after trying hard for a long time, 就是说, achieve有努力达到的意思. 偶是一看就觉得不舒服. 提干里主语per-capita consumption of pasta 不能象人一样去努力.

不晓的对不对, 还请班长指正...

halcyon · 发表于 2004-1-7 22:36:00

xiexie

alfred4044 · 发表于 2004-1-8 08:18:00

1、notably=ESPECIALLY，perhaps 和 most 两个副词修饰 notably，notably 修饰后面的名词短语。
2、这里应该使用现在进行时强调正在发生的情况，a错在使用了完成时。
请大家指正。

Yuwusheng · 发表于 2004-1-8 18:11:00

20,
a 错在which 指代不明，US or per capita.... SC的第一要旨在于complete and clear defination to avoid ambiguity.

halcyon · 发表于 2004-1-8 21:39:00

那是不是 n1 of n2, which... 都有指代不明的问题？？？

alfred4044 · 发表于 2004-1-9 10:09:00

以下是引用Yuwusheng在2004-1-8 18:11:00的发言：
20,
a 错在which 指代不明，US or per capita.... SC的第一要旨在于complete and clear defination to avoid ambiguity.

兄台所言极是。

请教两道题 885-16-7 & 885-16-20！！！

请教两道题 885-16-7 & 885-16-20！！！

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