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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who do not work but have a lot money are rarely happy.

Modern people have been paying close attention to whether happy we are increasingly, and there is much discussion on the relationship between people have a lot money but do not need to work and they are happy or not. Having established in some people's mind, the thinking is that having a lot of money is the source of happiness, to say nothing of doing not need to work. On the other hand, some people might claim that the connection between happiness and having a lot of money and do not need to work is not existent. And from my point view, I do not think that they could felled happy when people they do not work but having a lot money for several reasons.

It is true that people who do not work but have a lot of money could acquire some contentedness. If whose life likes that, people do not need to work but could earn lots of money, his/her life will become easier. A telling example of this involves that people all hope their life become easier, like me, I always wish that I got a lot of money and could buy everything I like someday and I will fell content. However, indisputably, the condition people felt contentedness is not that simply and is temporary. So I approve that people who do not work but have a lot of money are rarely happy, as illustrate below.

To begin with, the essential reason can be seen by everybody is that people who do not need to work but have a lot of money have no sense of accomplishment, because they did not work and not hardworking, and then the money they have is not earned by themselves. So their lives have no objects, and they can not feel happy. For example, although the building worker's job is very heavy and can not attain much money, if they saw the building which they built, they will have a sense of accomplishment and they will taste happiness. Nevertheless, people who did not make great effort, they gain the happiness named sense of accomplishment rarely.

In addition, another reason is that if people do not need to work and have lots of money, they will have no workmates and friends; therefore they can not feel happy. For instance, old people always are not happy, because they have nothing to do, retire and do not need to work, so they have no workmates and lack a way for communication. My grandfather is rarely happy since he retired, so if a young people do not need to work, he/she will vacuous and unhappier.

To sum up, although perhaps doing not work and have a lot money will give people some contentedness, that is temporary. Thus, I still believe that people still will feel unhappy, because they can not have a sense of accomplishment if they do not make effort, and they have no workmates or friends to communicate and then feel vacuous.

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只看了第一段, 感觉有些雍肿.可以少些字.

我改了一下.

Modern people have been paying close attention to whether happy we are increasingly, and there is much discussion on the relationship between people have a lot money but do not need to work and they are happy or not. Having established in some people's mind, the thinking is that having a lot of money is the source of happiness, to say nothing of doing not need to work. On the other hand, some people might claim that the connection between happiness and having a lot of money and do not need to work is not existent. And from my point view, I do not think that they could felled happy when people they do not work but having a lot money for several reasons.

(Currently, a remarkable argument rises over the discussion that people become happy when they own a huge mounts of money. Ones believe that satisfaction is sat on the foundation of how much money they possess. Obviously in their mind, those people establish a certainly definite connection between happiness and money. On the opposite, after contemplating, I realize that people with a lot of money, even they do not have to work anymore, are hardly actually happy.)