og12-23引发的关于【分词】在【并列句】句尾的问题，跪求指导

zoexixi · 发表于 2011-12-8 13:45:54

In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center， but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.

(A)In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is

(B)According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is

(C)Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now

(D)The discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now

(E)The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now

答案为C，OG的各项解释我也明白，我的问题是，假设有这样一个选项

(F) The discus used in track competition was once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now it is

我设置这个选项的【目的】是想说如果存在一个答案，【不存在】语法错误，但是它是一个【并列句】，所以请大家忽略此选项中可能有的语法错误

如果这样一个【无语法错误的并列句】成立，那么句末的【improving从句】，该如何看待它修饰的对象？
逻辑上它是修饰第二个分句，但是它会不会造成修饰不清楚的问题，比如它形式上可以修饰第二个分句么？可以修饰整个并列句么？又能不能跳跃修饰第一个分句？如果以上问题成立，那么这一点修饰混乱，又能不能成为判定【F】选项错误的TIP？

综合起来说，就是【SVO, and SVO,- ing从句】这种结构是否存在？如果存在，【-ing从句】的成分优先考虑修饰哪个？其次是哪个？

跪求大牛指导，谢谢！

zoexixi · 发表于 2011-12-8 20:24:48

在线求~~~！！！

HarrisZheng · 发表于 2011-12-8 20:48:07

既然是并列句，那就是两个完整的句子，分词状语在哪个句子里就修饰哪个。所以位置决定修饰

zoexixi · 发表于 2011-12-8 20:59:53

既然是并列句，那就是两个完整的句子，分词状语在哪个句子里就修饰哪个。所以位置决定修饰

-- by 会员 HarrisZheng (2011/12/8 20:48:07)

请问LS，您的意思我是不是可以理解为，【SVO, and SVO, ing从句】这种结构是存在的，并且它是修饰【and后面】的那个从句，并且不存在修饰整个句子这种歧义，是么？

HarrisZheng · 发表于 2011-12-8 21:21:24

我觉得可以存在，但一般还是改成复合句更好看吧。一堆简单句并列显得没水平，大量从句嵌套是GRE或是GMAT比较prefer的

zoexixi · 发表于 2011-12-8 21:29:41

我觉得可以存在，但一般还是改成复合句更好看吧。一堆简单句并列显得没水平，大量从句嵌套是GRE或是GMAT比较prefer的

-- by 会员 HarrisZheng (2011/12/8 21:21:24)

谢谢您的回答，从OG的解释来看，我一直觉得GMAT的首选是并列句呢, 我想再问下，如果（F）选项存在，也是成立的是么？有没有关于【SVO, and SVO, ing从句】这种结构存在的例子，我想再体会下，万分感谢您了！！！

HarrisZheng · 发表于 2011-12-8 21:57:54

首先, 你要搞清楚一个概念. 复合句比简单句并列简洁
几个不能算是原则的参照吧:
复合句比简单句堆叠简洁如 I have a dog, and he likes to go out for a walk. 就不如I have a dog that likes to go out for a walk.

短语比从句简洁如 My dog likes to go out for a walk when he finishes dinner. 不如，分词结构 Finishing dinner, my dog likes to go out for a walk. 或者独立主格 Dinner finished，my dog likes to go out for a walk

F 选项语法没错但没有C选项好

zoexixi · 发表于 2011-12-8 22:06:51

谢谢哦，非常感谢您的回答！！！

本贴相关题目 OG-12-SC-23 | GMATPrep-2008E2-SC-160 (JDBO)

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