[求助]28号就考了, 作文求拍, 谢谢各位了!

发现写作文最最大的问题是没有思路, 首先是理屈, 再加上词穷, 简直没指望了. 请各位赐教了.

Renewable resources of energy (sun, wind, wanter)will soon replace the old resources of fossil fuels(gas, oil and coal), agree or disagree?

The modern society has focused on the development of renewable resources, and there is a predominant trend of designing facilitates aiming at the environmental protection. According to those facts, from my prospective, renewable energy will be the main resources in the near future.

For one thing, with the development of the society, most people have achieved the basic living subsistence, such as food, shelter, clothing, and transportation. Therefore, the awareness of the health and a better living condition arouses the conscious of environmental protection. The use of traditional energy has caused many environmental problems. For instance, coal, one kind of traditional energy, always gives off black smokes which have polluted the once blued sky to be a grey one. In some areas, hardly can people find the shining stars above even in a clear night. With the industries growing in one city, the fossil fuels lead to a consequence that the dusts inside the air have reached a paramount high level. All those mentioned are urged to be given away, and the old energy resources should be replaced by some other energy that will give off less or even no pollutions. One of the merits of the renewable energy is its less polluted.

In addition, as the energies are categorized into renewable and irrenewable, people are conscious of the fact that the traditional energy will be used up sooner or later. A renewable energy is the mere method that is fit for the sustainable development of the modern society. As a country with limited resources, Japan has begun to invest a large amount of money to research the renewable resources from 1970's. The famous auto manufacturer TOYODA now is leading the market of conception autos with hydro-powered energy, which replaces the fossil energy and cost less.

Although there are some technique problems with the renewable energy in current days, we believe in the irreversible trend of a replacement of traditional fossil fuels. The advantages of the new resources promise our society a more healthy and sustainable development.

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楼上的，我也28号也！我看了你的，比我写的好！

我今天才是写第一篇作文。一眼望去，不能和你的比的。555