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发表于 2007-8-24 03:12:00 | 只看该作者

第一篇 斑竹多提意见 我承受的住>

13. Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Eat at home or out?

    Nowadays, with the food stands and restaurants emerging in everywhere, people have numerous options about eating. Weighing the pros and cons about eating at home or out, some people confuse to make a decision where they prefer to. As far as I am concerned, eating at home or out should depend on the circumstances.

    If you are on holiday and want to eat delicious food more agreeable with your stomach, cooking at home is worth the time and trouble. It is not hard to imagine a sunny day; I buy my own groceries and cook for myself the most suitable food. What a lovely day it is! And the only thing I need to pay is the time for me to cook.

    Additionally, every family need chances to communicate with each other. Eating at home is the most convenient method to make relationships stronger, exchange thought through family members, and bring us a special kind of joy. On the contrary, if family members eat out frequently, it is rather difficult for them to get together in the same time at the same place to have a dinner. Even though they are in the same restaurant, the fast food will reduce the time they stay together.  To put it differently, they have little time to feel the atmosphere in family.

    Nevertheless, the tempo of life is faster and faster. Each and every step of preparation is a time- consuming task. It means that majority won't waste time to it. In contract, they possibly go out to have a single dinner and gain extra chances to do other meaningful things. Take myself for example. As a student for me, it is fit to grab a quick bite to eat at a restaurant during the final examinations. The reason is quite straightforward: I needn’t bother with the dishes, but saving more time and burying myself in study.

    In a word, where to eat is not changeless. It should rely on what kind of life style you live.

大家多提意见 谢谢谢谢^_^


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沙发
发表于 2007-8-24 08:03:00 | 只看该作者

你可以先参考该版置顶的帖子里边的修改集合

然后我在iBT区有一个写作的帖子,你也可以参考一下

然后发现自己的一些问题,进行修改过后再发上来

我进行具体的修改

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-26 02:17:00 | 只看该作者

看了置顶 觉得高人真是太多了...

斑竹帮忙看看我的作文,是否存在什么硬伤呢?

还有~我看其他同学的作文,用词啦~表达啦~感觉都特别不一样,觉得不是积累了一天两天了,我一时学不来啊,有什么别的补救方法?

谢谢斑竹

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