A.when locusts are placed with others of their species, ===》According to entomologists,single locusts are quiet creatures,but when locusts are placed with others of their species,they become excited,change color,vibrate,and even hum. E.placed with others of their species,then ==》According to entomologists,single locusts are quiet creatures,but placed with others of their species,then they become excited,change color,vibrate,and even hum. 1# 改变原句中心,将时间状语从句改成并列成分。 2# but 后面的句子明显不完整,如果认为placed 前面省略了single locusts 做主语的话,then they 前面需要加上and 连接两个分句。 |