7月7号考，第一次练习写作，德克请进。

      Direct point out the mistake will despoil the friendship, but worse would it be if I do not point it out. The magic acceptable way is allude that he got the mistake and let himself notice about it. There're some backdrawings if we point out his mistake too straightly.

      First of all,would everyone accept direct scold? Obviously no. Pointing out his mistake in an implicate way, as no dout, would be a conservative and safer method. The character of different people may vary somewhat. For example, some are open-minded person who would like to accept any resaonable blames,while some intronert person would feel it a shame to be pointed out mistake directly.

      In addition, reputation is so important which seems like a brand of a product. Everyone hope to give people a nice impression, and hope to be perfect, and no one want to make a mistake.  Even if he made a  mistake, he would not like to let people notice that. Other than that, he would like to remedy it without people knows about it. I, myself, is a good example. This is always what I am doing, fix my mistake before people knowing it, whiout affact other people, and keep a good reputation.

      In addition, I cherish my friendship, so I won't point out my friend's mistake directly. Friendship is so crucial, and no one can survive without friends. People are socialized, and it is a must-do activity to communicate, live and work with people. To built up a good relationship is so criticle to be successful in the carrer. Harmony friendship will lead to a enjoyable life.

      Conclusively, to chrish a friendship, and for the reputation of friend, undubiously, point out friend's mistake indirectly would a more preferable way.

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Direct point out the mistake will despoil the friendship, but worse would it be if I do not point it out. The magic(optimal最好的) acceptable way is (to)
     allude that he got the mistake(has made a mistake) and let himself notice about it. There're(分开,There are)
      some backdrawings if we point out(point out不要重复太多次,这里同样可以用indicate) his mistake too straightly.

      First of all(First of all这种结构在综合写作中是可以用的,但是独立写作中最好不要用,你可以说for one thing),
     would everyone accept direct scold(可以变化一下句型:Has direct condemn ever been
        something acceptable?)? Obviously no(Evidently never.). Pointing out his mistake in an implicate(implicating用动名词当形容词) way, as no dout(doubt), would be a conservative and safer method. The character of different people may vary somewhat. For example, some are open-minded person who would like to accept any reasonable blames,
     while some intronert(这个词没有见过) person would feel it a shame to be pointed out mistake directly.(这个东西是抽象的,为了得高分,你最好可以把这个抽象的假设的例子变成一个具体的实例,当然你可以编造的.虽然老外是不喜欢这样的抽象议论的,但是TOEFL考试似乎可以容忍)
      

      In addition(For another), reputation is so important which(which最好紧跟reputation后面,reputation前面最好加个good/acclaimed) seems like a brand of a product. Everyone hope to give people a nice impression(Everyone, in the hope of impressing others positively, attempts to avoid some embarrassing moments,), and hope(hopes)
      to be perfect, and no one want(单数形式!) to make a mistake.  Even if he made a mistake, he would not like to let people notice that. Other than that, he would like to remedy it without people knows about it. I, myself, is a good example. This is always what I am doing, fix my mistake before people knowing it, without affecting other people, and keep a good reputation.(你太多抽象的例子了,需要举具体的.问题不少,你根本没有动词单数形式的概念)

      In addition(To such two reasons, another must be added), I cherish my friendship, so I won't(分开will not)
      point out my friend's mistake directly. Friendship is so crucial, and no one can survive without friends. People are socialized, and it is a must-do activity to communicate, live and work with people. To built up a good relationship is so criticle to be successful in the carrer. Harmony friendship will lead to a enjoyable life.

      Conclusively, to chrish a friendship, and for the reputation of friend, undubiously, point out friend's mistake indirectly would a more preferable way.

(凭借着你的感觉去写.现在我也没有好办法.你要避免太多的抽象论证,需要有实例来支持议论,实例是可以编造的,但是要有细节.动词的单复数用注意.拼写不要太快,很多错误.)

哎，同感，已经工作了的人，复习时间的确没有什么优势啊。

上班学习兼顾，还要避开老板，

人际关系复杂，还要担心会被好事者到处传。

可怜啊！

PS：本人在读研，其实和上班族没有什么区别，唯一的不同是，没有工资，没有加班费，没有休息。

传说中的裸考啊...