请来研究一下twe121的写法

aw_chiu · 发表于 2003-11-21 14:25:00

今天练习了四篇作文，做121觉得非常不满意，没能在30分钟之内完成，也没有什么好的ideas，参考了作文资料库里的材料，还是写不出来。题目是：
Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other peopledo not judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impression are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.
大家帮我出出主意吧!

nanozhang · 发表于 2003-11-21 15:46:00

agree with the latter one.
here are my outline:
1.admittedly, some people indeed judge others by their first impression. ( you can line the reason, give an example such as fabricating a person such as your neighbor)
2.however,the first impression of a person is always misleading.( cite another example: a friend of you who looks facetious but actually is very sincere)
3. In order to advoid of unfair judgement, we should make our conclusion after full comprehension has been made toward the object.

aw_chiu · 发表于 2003-11-22 00:03:00

thanks a lot! I'll try to re-write today.

请来研究一下twe121的写法

请来研究一下twe121的写法

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