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Independent writing: 

agree or disagree? subjects such as art,music,and drama should be a part of children's basic eduction.

As we known, a well-rounded basic education plays a crucial role in one’s development. It’s not only related to one’s school work, but also has a far-reaching impact on a child’s personality, As to the education(educational?) issue , I hold a positive attitude towards the statement, that is to say, subjects such as arts,music,and drama should be part of children ’s curriculum. In order to understand the logic behind the statement, we ‘d better to check the further details below.

Firstly,various basic courses could stimulate a child’s interest or enthusiasm.on art. Innocent as a newborn, usually, they hold some natural passion on painting ,music or drama since they once painting on the wall or singing to their parents, or even gained praise on acting in a play.That’s the valuable interests we shouldn’t neglect or reject.In order to meet their natural needs ,attaining art classes could emphasize their interests, inspire them to explore their talents, and translate the recreation into a hobby, or even professional directed by the teachers’ encouragement. 

Secondly,operating a course arrangement in diversity could broaden their mind, and makes a person more thoughtful. When some one studies art or music,or drama,one is exposed to many different cultures and points of view. It’s potentially beneficial to allow them to see the world with a set of new eyes. These subjects could spark children’s inspiration in considering the difference of several subjects while bringing up to their esthetic appreciation .Experiencing diverse art forms,could foster a good sense of  thinking.

Finally, viewing art, listening to music ,and acting in a play could be regarded as relation or entertainment. Imaging a situation that children have to tolerant a while day of studying and writing,it might have a negative impact on compromising their natural integrity. No doubt, they would be nervous and tired, even collapse in exhaustion. By contrast, it might be a slight for sore eyes to attain subjects such as art, music and drama for fun, which made them nervous relax and set their minds free. For example,they can express emotions through singing, and derive pleasures from paiting—drawing a picture to achieve their wishes. Once, I have appreciated a little girl’s painting which empowered herself to fly like a bird, in order to be apart from heavy study pressure,especially comes from math homework.

From what has been discussed above , I believe childhood, the crucial period of shaping a perfect personality, educated by diverse curriculums including art ,music and drama would cause many be benefits to them. These subjects might influence them unconsciously or semi-consciously.