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ETS 要求有special examples， 但是我看许多范文也不乏纯理论论证的。 那么怎样才叫举例呢。下面是我的作文，请教一下ETS的要求例证我是否体现了。 最近比较蒙的说。16号就考了，请大家帮帮忙指正下作文中存在的问题，不胜感激！！！ Most students would prefer to go to university as soon as they graduate from high school. It seems like a good idea since entering university directly after high school would save their a great deal of time. After all, time is the most precious in the modern world. It all sounds great in theory. Nevertheless, I believe that high school students should go to university one year later after the graduation of high school. My reasons are as followed. First of all, one year job experience promises us an excellent study in university. Actually, working for a full year shapes our understanding of what major is the modern society needing most. To some extent, this will help us to choose a major that fits us most. Today, many students complain about not choosing their favourite major on the ground that they have little information of what major fits them most before they go to the university. How can a person who dislikes what he/she learn would make a remarkable improvement in his/her study. In addition, taking a job teaches us some basis knowledge about one subject. For example, a student working in a computer company for a long time, definitely, would grasp some basic knowledge about computer. Naturally, the knowledge what they learned during their work would assist them to have a good study after they become a university student. Secondly, through working in a company, students would be more prone to get a good job in the future than those who do not have this experience. On one hand, working in a company we would have to deal with different kinds of people, cooperation with our co-workers and communicate with them. This process can help us build a good character, such as honesty, confidence and other important characters for a person to succeed. On the other hand, if the company, we work for, is an influential, international one, we would get a convincing recommendation letter from the boss. Of course, such a recommendation letter makes us outstanding when hunting for a good job. Also, we think about returning to the company after we graduate from university.
In conclusion, I content that students should work for a year before they become a formal university student. It will not just be good for us to choose a good major, but make us more competitive in the search of a satisfied job. | 
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