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How is your generation different from your parents' generation?

As is so often pointed out, Changes of world, with its ever increasing speed , is becoming more and more manifest. Owing to this, the difference between children and their parents is also increasingly pronounced.

  For starters, compared to our parents'generation,the way to study is tremendously different. A case in point is that in the past when they prepare to write a paper, he have to spend all day in libraries for scanning vast numbers of books. Nevertheless, we,with the invention of the Internet, have much easier avenue to complete the assignment. We only need to bring our laptops,then connect the Internet and type in the keywords or phrases on goggle, a famous search engine.within less than a second, countless pages will come up containing all the information I ever need.

  Furthermore, we have totally different ways of entertainment. Currently PS2, MP4 and PSPare the main recreations in our daily lives.we use them to play electronic games, listen to music legally downloaded from the Internet,even watch online movies. However,in our parents' time, they did not have such luxuries. Instead, outdoor activities occupied their part time. At weekends, they always got together to play football or go boating.

  In final way that our method of communication are greatly different from our parents. To give a demonstration, when my father was young, he worked abroad. At that time, the undeveloped method of communication such as sending letters, apparently, could not satisfied his simple desire that when he missed my grandparents, he was able to talk with them at once. In comparison to my parents, we are so lucky. When we miss our parents, we can use messaging applications,such as OICQ or MSN.Due to this, we can not only communicate with parents quickly and directly, but meet them through video. 

  Consequently,I uphold the idea that our generation is vastly different from our parents' in modern society.Unfortunately, owing to such a large difference, a very wide generation gap exists today.

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