Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
但这个句子里 coordinating没有preceding clause 谁能告诉我他到底在修饰什么? 难不成是作定语修饰illustration?
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
coordinating them with her narratives是noun modifier,在这里错误修饰illustrations. illustrations不能coordinate them (illustrations again) with ...