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以下是一篇做BARRON模考时候狂敲出来的作文, 请各位拍砖.

(说明, 我打算我去考的时候就追求两点, 字多, 少犯语法错误, 以这个指导思想写的下面的作文, 所以用词用句完全没有斟酌过， 大虾看起来可能比较菜了哈，576个字, 不知道我这个知道思想对不对, 请高人指点)

College years are the best times in our lives

Most of those people who have experienced the college lives may have this point of view that the college years are the best time in a person's life. Although I am now still a senior undergraduate student, I personally hold my positive opinion towards this statement.

First, during the college years, we are accompanied by our fellow students and teachers. Fellow students may be our closest friends in our daily lives in college, with whom we live together, study together, experience lives together, and achieve common goals together, from which we established our deep friendships. When I find any problems or difficulties in my life, I will instantly run into my close friends for suggestions or help, this make me release when passing through these years in college. And teachers, on the other hand, are the ideal advisors in helping us with our life and academic issues. Once a professor told me that professors or teachers in the college are having willingness of the great achievements and brilliant futures of their students; they will try to help their students to address the problems that will prevent them from being success; so the students should try to exploit the resources or opportunities available from their teachers in college, this would be a great help for them.

Second, after our gradation, we will have no such free life time as it was in the college. We have to find jobs to sustain out family and we have to work hard to get the promotion. Facing those life burdens we haven't been responsible for, we will need to suffer a period of hard time before we get accustomed to it. After we getting a job, the thing occupies most of the time in our lives is working, we need to work hard to get a good salary, to get promotion, to earn our selves better lives. However, life is not easy for any of us. Competitions, the frustrated rules which you have to follow in our society, and lack of time to relax yourself may drive you crazy. No teachers will guide you through these hard period of live any more, you have to grope it yourself, and it is more than likely there are fewer friends who can help you or give you suggestions on your personal issues like it was in the college years.

Third, those trivial things in our lives will also be a frustration, especially after your marriage. Lives become more and more complicated and not easy to follow. Looking back at those college years, what you need to worry about is simply yourself, while a lot of people can give you help and guide you to conquer those difficulties; in contrast, now you have to take care of your wife or husband, your parents, and your children, and for most of these jobs you have to do it yourself.

If I could, I prefer to stay in the college phase in my whole life, because it is the best time I have experienced so far, and I think I won't have such pleasure time in my future because of the pressure from the work, the heavy burden from both the job and family and the competition in such a fast pace society. Anyway, I will be facing my future with hope, no matter how difficult it will be, I will just make up my mind to be responsible for my relatives, my future, and our society.