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185。You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

A myriad of legend stories, in books and movies, always tell us a fact that everyone should possess their own business if they dream to be millionaire ,then keep this title go on and on. Youngsters in finance class of high school are often reminded of a eternal belief that money makes money in business. Therefore, Money, which is the value symbol that can buy everything people desire and thus give people multiple options how to use, should absolutely be invested in business. Investing a business, on the condition that I have enough money, I believe unshakably, can bring wealth, knowledge and experience.

How to make money? Diverse people have various ways and methods. Maybe most of people, but not all, choice to occupy positions in a companies or government. But can these positions, maybe granting some people a considerable money because their diligent work and smart mind, make  these people become the long-standing rich ? Absolutely NOT- “rich dad, poor dad”, the best-selling book in America three years ago, definitely answered this question. An example also have given in this book-people, who has a quite well-earning position in a big company, after quiting for only four months, will keenly feel pain of his finance crisis. However, a business, if being managed well, can bring endless profit and the “real rich”.

The business world is a tremendously intricate world. To conquer it, amounts of knowledge need to handle. For example, how to balance input and output of a business? How to seek sufficient supplies? How to efficiently use labors and supplies? How to search an ideal market to gain maximized benefit? The answers to all of these questions need a great deal of knowledge, including management, accounting, logistics, marketing, production knowledge and so on. Although it is unnecessary for one person who wants to run a business to become the expert in every kind of knowledge, without any idea about them, he will get into a desperate swamp.

Whether one person win or fail to a business, he will gain many precious experiences. Of course, the victory in the business combat will inject an exhilarant dose to improve confidence and therefore expand the business, but failure cannot deny anything if people dig out the reasons of failure and get inspired to do better from lessons, even in some situations that failure can lead to huge success. Even if nothing can be seized in a business, at least one word will be thoroughly understood-survive is tough in the business world.

So, although purchasing a house, maybe, can bring a comfortable place to live, even a home with the family, sometime it adding value in real estate market(strictly it is a investment in business), it is hard to guarantee the wealth of all life for people. As the reason above probably can tell, I tend to choose to buy a business if I have enough money.