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lll123 · 发表于 2003-11-6 10:02:00

1.open in 1683 the asnolean was the first public museum in great Britain, (while earlier the bodleian has been the first truly public library.)
(1)just as earlier the bodleian had been
(2)as the earlier bodleian has been
选（1），如果（2）改为as the earlier bodleian had been可否？

2.( plausible though it sounds, the weakness of the hypothesis) is that it does not incorporate all relevant evidence. .
(1)though the hypothesis sounds plausible, it’s weakness.
(2)The weakness of the hypothesis which sounds plausible.
选（1），（2）为什么不行？

gemj · 发表于 2003-11-7 00:20:00

1
改为as the earlier bodleian had been不可以。因为earlier本来是作状语的，现在变成了bodleian的定语。

2
从逻辑意思上说，由（1）表达的转折关系比（2）表达的修饰关系要好。
WHICH改为THAT也更好一些。
WHICH从句有修饰weakness的嫌疑。

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