请教GWD 15-4 （以前没讨论过）

Q4:

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

1. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
2. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
3. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
4. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
5. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

参考答案是D，我选的是E。请高人给解释一下

我認為，E 當中，至少三處不妥。

第一: 第二行末的that，用法不對。要用的話，應該用關係代名詞 who，指涉人。

第二: 第二行中，becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish....

連用兩次first，太累贅。比較簡潔的寫法可以是:becoming the first woman and Swedish writer...

第三: 第一行中，turned away from...and wrote romantic...，兩者動詞用and 連接，似乎表示兩個動作之間關連不大。但實際上，兩者是有語意關聯的。turned away from...to write romantic...用不定詞接，表示"目的"，語意上較通順，較接近原始語意。

以上淺見，請多指教。

我选的是C, 请教一下为什么不对.

            1909

        

                Selma Ottilia Lovisa Lagerlöf (1858-1940)

    Swedish writer. Selma Ottilia Lovisa Lagerlöf turned
                away from the literary
                realism and wrote in a romantic and imaginative manner, vividly evoking the peasant
                life
and landscape of Northern Sweden. She received the 1909 Nobel Prize in
Literature "in appreciation of the lofty idealism, vivid imagination
and spiritual perception that characterize her writings."