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还6天就考试啦, 麻烦再帮忙指点一下作文

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发表于 2006-11-13 13:29:00 | 只看该作者

还6天就考试啦, 麻烦再帮忙指点一下作文

下面一篇是昨晚看了JJ刚写的, 35分钟左右. 我写了28分钟,改2分钟 后来又改了几分钟,语法不好  改做文时间总是不够. 还有1篇是KPLAN里的练习题,没有答案很不爽.麻烦做过的帮忙看一下,我听的不是很清楚也还可以,但主要是对不上点.求教考试找对应点是不是也很麻烦. 

Animals are the only living species that beside human kind in this world. There is no denying that animals have many similarities with us. Therefore, I think through observing animals we can derive many important information. As I have been always fancinated about the world of animal, I had just finished a book that called "The Meaning of Life". Inside, there are numorus photos about animals display some meaning about human life. I would illustrate a few to proved that animal can teach us a lot of staff.

In the first place, I think the mother love in the world of animals just as strong as humanbeings. From some carnial mammal to small bird, all of the mothers loved and nutured their offspring. Citing an instance, lion, one of the most dangerous mammal in the world. The scientific study shows that no matter how skillful lion had on killing and preying other animals, but it would never hurt its son and daugther. It has been often observed that lion usually feed its baby after hunting, and teach those little lions the essential skills to survive. All those behaviors were as appreciable as humanbeing in nowadays society.

Morever, the animal understand the benifit of team work. Still citing the example of lion, the female lion is usually approaching the deer and other animals considered as its food, the male lion ambushed and waited for the kill. As animal has been used the team work to achieve its goals, so does human do. We often advocating that "united is power", indicate that to work within a group and with other people would enable us to share our specialty and to be more productive.

Ultimately, the universial things among animals and humanbeing is love. I think this is the most important skill natural gives to all the livings.The love from animal could be witnessed as some altruisim behavior among its group, and love between offspring and its parents, most importantly, the love to live in this world. 

To conclusion, animal showns us some of the most foundamental meaning about our life. From observing animals, it remand us that we should never neglect to see there are so many good things worth apprieciated in our live.

INTEGRATING

 

The professor is primarily describing some disadvantages of prescribed burning. Contrary to the belief in the passage that prescribed burning is beneficial to the safety of people. He argues that the theory in the reading passage is inaccurate and unwarranted.

At the beginning, the reading passage state that prescribed burning is safe and effective. While, the professor counter this point by given an instance that the prescribed burn has been out of control and caused extraordinary damages for local residents.

Moreover, the lecturer suggests that prescribed burning is not the only way to solve the problem of too much fuel that may cause more catastrophic wildfire. There are alternative such as use chemicals and raise goats to rein this problem.

Finally, the lecturer oppose to use prescribed fire and list the reason that in dry weather the fire in not good for environment, and could cause air pollution. To use other safer method as sell those woods to carpeting companies is much less expensive than to compensate the loss of resident's house.

 

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