我的第二篇作文

生活在大城市还是小城市的问题，

拍砖吧，我还抗得住。

Now, I live in a big city. And I like to live in big city rather than to stay in some small town. Some one may argue that small town could provide peaceful enviroment and better neighborhood relationships. Yes, it's true, I also high value these merits which seems unique in small towns. While I have to consider other aspects, for example, job opportunities, better education avalabilities and more convient living conditions. In these aspects, large cities is a better choice than small towns.

First of all, big cities can provide more and better job opportunities for me. As we all know, the big companies and cooprations always setup their headquaters and key business departments in the big cities, as well as some best financial organizations. And these headaquaters and organizations always provide positons will relatively high pay and good working environment. If I live in the big city, I could enjoy the chances to take these chances and to have a decent job.  And if I want to take and advanaced training programms, big city is also a good choice than small town. Many famous universities and colleges are loacats in the big cities, I can benefit from the training programs provided by these schools.

Second, if I have a child, big city can provide better opportunities from my child. Quite often, my child could have several choice of schools in which my child can complete his prelimary, middle and high school study. So, my child can choose the best school in the city and enjoy the high quality education offered by such a school. While in small town, the choice for different schools is very limited. Further more, living in big city, my child can make friends with children from various backgrounds, which could help my child to understand other peoples well and help his capability to communicate with others.

Third, the big city is also a good choice for my parents. My parents could enjoy the high quality service offered by the hospitals in big cities. And we all knw, the high quality service of the hospitals is very important to the old peoples. Besides that, my parents could spend their day time in the big parks if they want,  and they can enjoy theiy shopping in some big shopping malls in big cities, which is always impossible in some small towns.

Since the big city could so many advantages than the small towns, it's naturally for me to choose big cities as my preferrence.

some comments: 

you should keep your essay  consistent! 

make sure you can avoid the grammar mistake!

you may also want to use some words like however, on the other hand, it is true that...   instead of first, second ......   just some suggestion!!  hope it's good for u!~

btw, you easy is pretty good!! keep writing and you will improve it for sure!!~~

不是我说你。。。。你用的词太简单了

这样不会怎么出踩！