急问OG105

lovelypeggy · 发表于 2009-7-31 19:25:00

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

这两个选项全错了

B选项，答案说carefully coordinating ...illogically modifies book illustrations; Potter, not the illustrations, did the coordinating.

E选项，答案说participial phrase does not clearly modify book illustrations 我觉得这的coordinated不是做分词啊是和后面的capitalize并列做句子的谓语。。。。

望NN解释这两个选项的问题谢~~

lovelypeggy · 发表于 2009-7-31 20:15:00

顶。。

lovelypeggy · 发表于 2009-7-31 22:00:00

help。。。。。

lijiahui0422 · 发表于 2009-7-31 22:15:00

B 一个现在分词夹在两个名词中间，你说修饰那个？...不清楚
D修饰成分作谓语的话句子的重心就改变了，原来是想说 In ilusions ，这个人如何如何，

语法没有错，体会一下和正确答案意思的差别吧~

lovelypeggy · 发表于 2009-7-31 22:25:00

以下是引用lijiahui0422在2009/7/31 22:15:00的发言：

B 一个现在分词夹在两个名词中间，你说修饰那个？...不清楚
D修饰成分作谓语的话句子的重心就改变了，原来是想说 In ilusions ，这个人如何如何，

语法没有错，体会一下和正确答案意思的差别吧~

不好意思哈我忘打正确答案了这个正确的是 In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter capitalized on her keen observation....按这正确答案的意思 coordinate就是做了谓语的说~~

lijiahui0422 · 发表于 2009-7-31 22:47:00

不过是定语从句里的谓语罢了...还是修饰成分啊，和capitalized可不是并列关系啊，capitalized才是主句谓语

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