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13.   Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured the preparation of great quantities of ceremonial food, the wearing of many layers of colorful clothing adorned with silver, and the recounting of traditional tribal jokes and stories.

(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured

(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch’s home, which featured

(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring

(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured（D）

(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured

这样修饰语+主语+修饰语在OG11中说不好!见OG11诊断练习49,我想知道是不是因其他选项错误明显,相比之下,选了这个.

     A. they 指代不明,凡是有代词出现,指代不明的情况考察概率极高!

     B. Aho 应该是个人名, in Aho 不对,然后which引导的非限制性定从修饰home,不对,应该是festivals的特点

     C. 当分词短语作定语时,动作应与谓语动词同时发生,这里不对

     D. 这里修饰在11版中说了不好,但看来,这种同位于修饰的问题正确程度高于分词修饰

     E  定从修饰的是that

72, D-13

A) run-on
B) home, which错
C) who was多余，in her home位置不对。
D) best
E) festivals in her home that, that指代不清，home or festivals。

答案确实靠比较的。