E5-16. Charlotte Perkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburb an houses including communal eating and social facilities. B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses wit h communal eating and social facilities E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with c ommunal eating and social facilities included
1、call for是短语动词在第二个并列中，for是可以省略的。 a和D比较不好的地方是“communal eating and social facilities”由于for的省略使得句子的结构不清楚。如果原题中只有social facilities，那么A就比D好！而d由于补出了for使得句子的结构更加对称、清晰。 2、that引导的定语从句中当that 做从句主语的时候是不能省的，做从句宾语的时候是可以省略的。
消除歧义最重要，对仗不过是文字的美观，我的理解是锦上添花的东西，但是如果句子出现歧义了，特别英文中and连接的内容尤其小心，如and后面的内容的修饰，定语，分词和不定式等等。比如A and B，但是我们需要对B做定语，分词和不定式等修饰，这时候为了消除歧义，我的理解是最好改为B（修饰内容）and A就避免了把修饰内容理解为同时修饰AandB的歧义了。个人见解。
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