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求教885-19-16

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楼主
发表于 2004-3-14 21:11:00 | 只看该作者

求教885-19-16











16.         Bihar
is India’s poorest state, with an annual per capita income of $111, lower
than in
the most impoverished countries of the world.

(A) lower than in

(B) lower than
that of

(C) and lower than
that of

(D) which is lower
than in


(E) which is lower
than it is in




请问which什么时候可以省什么时候不可以?如果选项是“which is lower than that of”,是否可选?




沙发
发表于 2004-3-14 22:11:00 | 只看该作者
不可选,gmat认为这样不简洁。通常在定语从句中which/that+be都可省,甚至如that may be可能都不好,要改。例如:


Most insomnia is not an illness or a physical condition so much as a symptom of another problem that may simply be a reaction to certain medications, anxiety about travel, or stress before a job interview.


正确选项:so much an illness or a physical condition but symptomatic of another problem, maybe simply a reaction to certain medications


定语从句    that may be simply变成了,maybe simply 开头的同位语。当然此题的最大错不在此。

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-15 12:57:00 | 只看该作者

回复:(jnlvo)不可选,gmat认为这样不简洁。通常在定...

谢谢jnlvo,但是我的问题是关于在有逗号情况下先行词的省略。例如885-E-













23.         A
new phenomena, which is visible at Managua’s major intersections, are waves of
vendors and beggars, which include many children and
mob cars at the
stoplights.

(A) A new
phenomena, which is visible at Managua’s major intersections, are waves of
vendors and beggars, which include many children and

(B) Visible at
Managua’s major intersections are waves of vendors and beggars with many children,
new phenomena that

(C) A new
phenomenon (省略that is)visible at Managua’s major intersections is waves of vendors and
beggars, many of them children, who

(D) Phenomenally
new waves of vendors, beggars, and many children are visible at Managua’s major
intersections, which

(E) A wave of
vendors and beggars, many of whom are children, are visible at Managua’s major
intersections, where they are a new phenomenon and



此题选C,如果按照我前面的16题的形式,在此处加两个逗号,把visible at Managua’s major intersections变成插入语,那此时which is也是可以省略么?(语感上可以,但希望找到理论依据的说。。和和。。),如果按照lower than that of正确的话,这里就应该是对的了?。。。。In one word,在加逗号的情况下,先行词什么时候可以省略?多谢多谢!

(C) A new
phenomenonwhich is/that is) visible at Managua’s major intersections is waves of vendors and
beggars, many of them children, who


那此时which is也是可以省略么?(语感上可以,但希望找到理论依据的说。。和和。。),如果按照
lower than that of正确的话,这里就应该是对的了?。。。。In one word,在加逗号的情况下,先行词什么时候可以省略?多谢多谢!


地板
发表于 2004-3-15 13:53:00 | 只看该作者
我想在这里不完全是可不可省的问题,主要是简洁。明明是个形容词短语(或者名词,名词一般就是同位语)可以直接跟在名词后修饰名词,就没有必要变成一个which is的非限制性定语从句(加逗号)和限制性定语从句再去修饰前面,og里有过说明which is/that is应该被删除,不简洁。
5#
发表于 2004-3-15 14:03:00 | 只看该作者
如果,后不是which is这种形式,而是如which includes,那么有时是可以省去which,includes通常改成including,但这种变换,不是每次都成立的。二者还是有差别的,具体题目要具体分析。
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-15 22:07:00 | 只看该作者
多谢jnlvo的耐心。

可是在加逗号的情况下,先行词什么时候可以省略?



noun,(先行词)+从句,

7#
发表于 2004-3-15 22:17:00 | 只看该作者
一言难敝之。我的一点感受1. 省略后句子不会产生歧义,否则不行。2有时可以这样理解判断:泛指doing和特指which从句,此时注意时态句意。

8#
 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-16 19:38:00 | 只看该作者
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