XDF 21 两道帮忙分析一下谢谢

givemeahome · 发表于 2003-9-22 22:05:00

2. New Jersey’s is one of the five highest number of reported cases of Lyme disease in the United States.
(A) New Jersey’s is one of the five highest number of reported
(B) New Jersey’s is one of the five highest numbers in reporting
(C) New Jersey has a report of one of the five highest numbers of
(D) New Jersey has one of the five highest numbers of reported
(E) New Jersey reports one of the five highest number of

why not B

6. The Audubon Society and other conservation groups, concerned over what they have perceived to be the serious threatening of the environment as posed by the policies of the government, are preparing for a major political effort.
(A) have perceived to be the serious threatening of the environment as
(B) perceived as the serious threat to the environment as
(C) perceive being the serious threat to the environment
(D) are perceiving as the serious threatening of the environment
(E) perceive as the serious threat to the environment

why not B

sprog · 发表于 2003-9-22 22:14:00

对于2，我觉得New Jersey’s这里读起来很别扭而且有指代不明的嫌疑。
还有numbers in reporting好像没有这个说法。

sprog · 发表于 2003-9-22 22:21:00

对于6，不要被concerned over迷惑，其实句子是The Audubon Society and other conservation groups, （who are ）concerned over what......，后面又有are preparing for a major political effort，从句里面用一般现在时比较好。

个人意见，还请高手指教。

XDF 21 两道帮忙分析一下谢谢