T-4-Q4 考点是什么？

T-4-Q4  ？？

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A.      Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

B.      She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlof in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won

C.      Selma Lagerlof was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning

D.      A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

E.       As novelist, Selma Lagerlof turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish write that won

答案是D

我觉得每个选项考点不一样

A是逻辑主语不一致

B是句子结构~and的出现是没有道理的

C是改变动名词做定语的时候有表示动作正在发生,这个跟主句一般过去时矛盾~

E是更改原句的句意~Selma Lagerlof 第一个获得诺贝尔文学奖的女作家也是瑞典作家这个内容.而E用becoming引导后置定语, 中心变成前面的一句Selma Lagerlof turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden,明显和原句想表达的意思不一样~此外,动名词也可以理解动作正在发生，时态也矛盾~

长划线的句子一般是考察对句子结构的判断，如何做到最有效的表达，这种题错误选项一般不止一个错误（结构上和细节上）

拿A说

A.      Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

首先，现在分词伴随修饰在这个句子里面意思表达的就不如D准确， was多余 加上有歧义，本来说the first woman to win,直接给割断了，意思成了第一个女人(...夏娃)和第一个得诺奖的瑞典人，意思变了

TIPS，长划线题中，以独立主格和同位语出现的答案常常正确，both避免修饰上得歧义and使得结构清晰，表达有效~

个人的总结，供参考哈

那turing away有错吗？要不要改成turned away?