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3．Propose that 用法：虚拟，必须省略should? 164. The commission proposed that funding for development of the park, which could be open to the public early next year, be obtained through a local bond issue.
3．Propose that 用法：虚拟，必须省略should? 164. The commission proposed that funding for development of the park, which could be open to the public early next year, be obtained through a local bond issue.
1) A RUN-ON SENTENCE (sometimes called a "fused sentence") has at least two parts, either one of which can stand by itself (in other words, two independent clauses), but the two parts have been smooshed together instead of being properly connected.
2) When two independent clauses are connected by only a comma, they constitute a run-on sentence that is called a comma-splice. Example:"The sun is high, put on some sunblock." So when you use a comma to connect two independent clauses, it must be accompanied by a little conjunction (and, but, for, nor, yet, or, so).
3) Run-on sentences happen typically under the following circumstances*: a) When an independent clause gives an order or directive based on what was said in the prior independent clause: Example:"This next chapter has a lot of difficult information in it, you should start studying right away." (We could put a period where that comma is and start a new sentence. A semicolon might also work there.)
b) When two independent clauses are connected by a transitional expression (conjunctive adverb) such as however, moreover, nevertheless. Example:"Mr. Nguyen has sent his four children to ivy-league colleges, however, he has sacrificed his health working day and night in that dusty bakery." (Again, where that first comma appears, we could have used either a period — and started a new sentence — or a semicolon.)
c) When the second of two independent clauses contains a pronoun that connects it to the first independent clause. Example:"This computer doesn't make sense to me, it came without a manual. " (Although these two clauses are quite brief, and the ideas are closely related, this is a run-on sentence. We need a period where that comma now stands.)
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