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The nation’s three military academies have seen a dramatic rise in applications, one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies.

(A) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies

(B) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs that have increased at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting

(C) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, private colleges that increased their tuition costs, and recruiting improvements by the academies

(D) fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs increasing at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting（A）

(E) fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting

请问各位牛牛，为什么选A，考点是什么？我做到第三遍还是觉得B好，郁闷！

先在这谢谢各位了。

平行结构

B错在
1. tuition costs that have increased at private colleges 不简洁
2. academies improving their recruiting 与前面的结构不平行.

这题的考点很清楚，对称：形式对称 ＋ 含义对称 ，形式对称是指：都得是名词短语，含义对称则指：都得是表动态名词短语。

考点虽很清楚，但我做了两次也是错，我的迷惑是：到底怎么判定increasing tuition costs 和 academies improving their recruiting，谁是名词短语，谁是分词？请NN 指导。

但我觉得A中的one并无动态意义，而B中形式更对称，各位NN能不能翻译一下本题。

The nation’s three military academies have seen a dramatic rise in applications, one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies.
如果没有one，fueled by的修饰对象可以是a dramatic rise in applications中的核心名词rise，也可以是就近名词applications，因为两个名词在逻辑上和fueled by都讲得通，无法确定到底是哪个被修饰，而one的加入确定了fueled by的修饰对象只可能是单数名词rise，所以句子表达十分准确，是rise is fueled by ...

啊啊，真是如此，我怎么想不到呢，stoneren很神奇的说。不过还有个问题：到底怎么判定increasing tuition costs 和 academies improving their recruiting，谁是名词短语，谁是分词？请stoneren 指导。

(A) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, increasing tuition costs at private colleges, and improved recruiting by the academies

(B) one fueled by a resurgence of patriotism, tuition costs that have increased at private colleges, and academies improving their recruiting

A中increasing / improved实质都是形容词，核心名词分别是：costs / recruiting

B中academies improving their recruiting核心词其实也是名词：academies，improving作为后置分词修饰核心词。A/B的差异关键在于核心词的差异造成意思的改变。

谢谢stoneren，再麻烦一下：increasing tuition costs 和 academies improving their recruiting两者都既可以理解成以tuition和acdaemies为核心词的名词短语，也可以理解成tuition作increasing 的宾语的分词和academies作improving的逻辑主语的分词，怎样迅速地判断该理解成前者，还是理解成后者？