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Hello，想了半天起了个稍微fancy的题目，希望可以在大家留学的过程中有所帮助。我现在专攻北美本科研究生的申请，留学规划，文书写作，和面试培训一条龙。如果你有任何迷茫，不知道该如何选择专业和选择学校，或者不知道如何在文书中凸显自己的优点，让学校看到你的闪光点，请随时和我联系。
迄今为止，我已经在北美生活学习数十年了，研究生一毕业就开始做语言培训和留学申请。语言学专业背景，之后读了MBA，两次申请都是自己DIY。
众所周知，留学申请里面，最重要的两个就是成绩和PS了，但是现在很多机构写出来的都不尽人意。曾经帮父母朋友的孩子看申请本科的PS，要求是体现个人特色，中介写的是家乡和上海的差距。很多高中生不了解，坑比较多，希望我可以帮助大家避免这些错误，不花冤枉钱。
鉴于每年都会写至少几十篇文书，所以如果只有文书问题，也可以和我联系。可以帮您先改个开头，看一下质量，然后再决定是不是需要继续。
放两个过去写的Why school的例子，美本加本，作为参考。
Brown: I am particularly interested in Brown’s Biomedical Engineering and Neuroscience Program. It stems from my parallel passion for biology and chemistry; my insatiable curiosity for understanding both living and physical systems. For me, biology is inherently fascinating and periodic table is one of the most captivating things in the world. Moreover, my internship at Princess Margaret Cancer Center at University of Toronto has shown me those researchers’ arduous devotion in solving clinical challenges. I was mesmerized by their devoutness. I enjoy and yearn for the feeling of accomplishment that through my hard work, I can leave my footprints in the medical field. At Brown, I can delve into what I am passionate about in my freshman year, when students from other schools are still focusing on general educational requirements. The open curriculum will also allow me to combine both my interests, take risks and pursue where my passion lies. What I like the most about it is to be the “architect of my own education”. Besides the aforementioned programs, I am also ardent about art and literature. Open curriculum, therefore, provides maximum flexibility for me to combine seemingly disparate areas of study, art and science. In addition, there is a vast area of study that I am ignorant of. I will not stay confined within my comfort zone. By trying different courses, I can discover new interest. I can say without doubt that I am the embodiment of open curriculum.
Waterloo: My early exposure to business from the family background has endowed me with ample experience and a unique perspective regarding the different aspects of it. Therefore, I am fortunate to find my passion for accounting and finance early in life and have been working towards it. However, with an ambition to become a competent entrepreneur or work at organizational leadership positions, I lack the professional skills to shoulder an executive level of responsibility to bring consistent growth to an organization. The Accounting and Financial Management program at Waterloo will equip me with the necessary skills to thrive in the ever-changing business environment, through strengthening my leadership and analytical skills to become a well-rounded businessman. Waterloo is known for its academic rigor, exceptional faculty, and world-class facilities; so, it undoubtedly stands as my first choice.
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