求助一道题！ OG 2017 734 As well as & And

huangfangze · 发表于 2017-1-12 12:49:43

求助一道OG上的题！关于And 和 as well as 在一起用的用法。

In ancientThailand, much of the local artisans’ creative energy was expended for thecreation of Buddha images and when they constructed and decorated the templesthat enshrined them.

A. much of the local artisans’ creative energy wasexpended for the creation of Buddha images and when they constructed anddecorated the temples that enshrined them

B. much of the local artisans’ creative energy wasexpended on the creation of Buddha images and on construction and decoration ofthe temples in which they were enshrined

C. much of the local artisans’ creative energy wasexpended on the creation of Buddha images as well as constructing anddecoration of the temples in which they were enshrined

D. creating images of Buddha accounted for much ofthe local artisans’ creative energy, and also constructing and decorating thetemples enshrining them

E. the creation of Buddha images accounted formuch of the local artisans’ creative energy as well as construction anddecoration of the temple that enshrined them

正确答案是B。

我的问题是- 在C和E选项里，用了as well as 和and 一起作为连词连接了平行结构.

X as well as Y and Z.

这样表达是正确的吗?这样写的话是把Y和Z分到一类，然后再和X类比吗？ OG里面并没有对这个表达做出评论，只是指出了其它平行结构和句意的错误。

求各位牛人帮助解疑！万分感谢！！！

emmahiggins09 · 发表于 2017-1-12 20:25:45

楼主请看正确答案B中的平行是：
on the creation of Buddha image (X) and on construction(Y) and decoration (Z)...
要将Y和Z 看作一类 construction and decoration, 然后在和X 平行，这里要注意X是一个介词短语，所以在Y和Z前也有on 这个介词。
楼主在看C 中
on the creation of Buddha images (X) as well as constructing (Y) and decoration (Z) of...
先看Y和Z在结构上就是不平行，一个是gerund 一个是noun ：一般来说有一个单词有名词形式的就要优先使用它的名词形式而不是用动名词，这里construct 的名词形式是construction
再看X 和 YZ 也是结构上不平行，第一个是介词短语，第二个上的介词却没有出现

E的问题更加大，基本就是句子的结构发生了改变，原句是说 energy was expened on the creation of Budda image, E却变成了 the creation of Budda image acounted for energy, 如果句子没有后面的as well as 这种改写倒也勉强可以，但是后面有了 construction 和 decoration...句子就变成了 the creation of Budda image accounted for energy as well as construction and decoration 楼主理解一下句子的意思: accounted for energy as well as accounted for construction and decoration?? 这句句子是nonsense 的

huangfangze · 发表于 2017-1-13 04:58:41

emmahiggins09 发表于 2017-1-12 20:25
楼主请看正确答案B中的平行是：
on the creation of Buddha image (X) and on construction(Y) and decorat ...

多谢回复！！！！讲解的很清楚。
那如果是完全perfect的平行结构，就是在X,Y,Z 逻辑和语法都完全平行的情况下，
X as well as Y and Z 或者
X and Y as well as Z 是正确的表达方式吗？

emmahiggins09 · 发表于 2017-1-13 06:07:06

huangfangze 发表于 2017-1-13 04:58
多谢回复！！！！讲解的很清楚。
那如果是完全perfect的平行结构，就是在X,Y,Z 逻辑和语法都完全平行的情 ...

可以，在这种情况下 Z 与 X和Y 是不同类的

Prep 中的例子：
Gasoline marketing is undergoing major changes as stations often not only add convenience stores but also combine with major fast-food chains to build complexes where customers can shop and eat as well as buy gasoline. 这里shop and eat 的宾语显然不是gasoline

其实就是为了表示出不同，就像在第一句话中，用了“与” / “和”，语法的最高准则就是为了让表达更加清晰

希望对楼主有帮助

huangfangze · 发表于 2017-1-13 07:33:32

emmahiggins09 发表于 2017-1-13 06:07
可以，在这种情况下 Z 与 X和Y 是不同类的

Prep 中的例子：

啊！懂了！非常有帮助！！太感谢啦！！！

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