The failing of the book lies not in a lack of attention to scientific detail but in the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that reduce the credibility of the work. (A) the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that (B) fact that it depicts marine world scenes of life and death as having emotional overtones that (C) depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world, whose emotional overtones (D) depiction of marine world scenes of life and death, which have emotional overtones and thus(A) (E) fact that if depicts scenes of life and death in the marine world, whose emotional overtones 总觉得A最后的with emotional overtones有修饰歧义,既可以修饰depiction也可修饰world,这里好像根据就近原则修饰world更好(?) 请大家指点迷津! |