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蘑菇酱奋斗ing · 发表于 2016-7-21 18:10:44

曼哈顿上的练习题。
错句是 Dr. Crock's claims have been not corroborated by other scientists or published in a prestigious
journal but have nonetheless garnered a great deal of attention from the public.
正确的是
Dr. Crock's claims have not been corroborated by other scientists or published in a prestigious
journal but have nonetheless garnered a great deal of attention from the public.

为什么不是not have been corroborated... 与后面but have nontheless... 平行啊
不懂啊！！求解！谢谢！！

番番爱GMAT · 发表于 2016-7-22 02:06:31

错句和答案是一样的？

Fiona09 · 发表于 2016-7-22 11:01:43

是不是敲错了？两句一样呢

蘑菇酱奋斗ing · 发表于 2016-7-22 12:44:35

番番爱GMAT 发表于 2016-7-22 02:06
错句和答案是一样的？

之前打错了

现已改好！

蘑菇酱奋斗ing · 发表于 2016-7-22 12:45:41

Fiona09 发表于 2016-7-22 11:01
是不是敲错了？两句一样呢

谢谢提醒

已经改好了！

Fiona09 · 发表于 2016-7-22 14:48:46

说说我的理解哈，我觉得介个长难句涉及两处平行，可以拆分为：

第一个平行部分：Dr. Crock's claims have not been corroborated by other scientists or (been) published in a prestigious journal. （been我们一般省略使用）
介个平行部分的连接词是or，平行的是粗体后面的内容。

第二个平行部分：Dr. Crock's claims have not been corroborated by other scientists but have nonetheless garnered a great deal of attention from the public.
介个平行部分的连接词是but，平行的是两个have后的内容。

蘑菇酱奋斗ing · 发表于 2016-7-22 16:18:30

Fiona09 发表于 2016-7-22 14:48
说说我的理解哈，我觉得介个长难句涉及两处平行，可以拆分为：

第一个平行部分：Dr. Crock's claims have ...

但是第二个平行部分不应该是not...but...吗

not后没有have，but后有have，时态不一致，这样也平行吗

Fiona09 · 发表于 2016-7-22 18:58:10

蘑菇酱奋斗ing 发表于 2016-7-22 16:18
但是第二个平行部分不应该是not...but...吗

not后没有have，but后有have，时态不一致，这样也平行吗 ...

时态一致，是语态不一致

feyonce · 发表于 2016-7-28 00:13:11

"To begin with, the parallel verb in both clauses is "have," so beginning with "have" both times is essential.

Another example:

I have been to Paris, but I have not eaten snails.

Additionally, the word "not" never precedes the main verb. We say "I have not," "I do not," etc., and never "I not have" or "I not do." If not precedes these words, it is because it is modifying a preceding verb:

I do not have time to eat lunch.
I do not do yoga.

The "not x but y" structure you mentioned is used in many contexts, but is not generally used to compare main verbs. Here are a few examples:

The drug is not helpful, but harmful."
以上是官网上的解释

蘑菇酱奋斗ing · 发表于 2016-7-28 12:04:15

feyonce 发表于 2016-7-28 00:13
"To begin with, the parallel verb in both clauses is "have," so beginning with "have" both times is ...

明白了！！太感谢了！！

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