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发表于 2005-8-8 18:20:00 | 只看该作者

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TITLE:Some people choose friends who are different form themselves. Others choose
friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friend
s who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are sim
ilar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?


There is nothing more important than friends in our life. Making friends who are similar to or different from ourselves is indispensable for everyone. Both of the kinds of friends have obvious advantages. The friends who are similar to ourselves could bring us more pleasure while the other kind of friend could share more experience with us.


As far as I am concerned, the friends who are different from myself is more suitable to me. There are a number of reasons as to why this is the case. First of all, there are more opportunities to obtain the useful experience of different fields from the friends who are different to myself. For example, when I was obsessed with some problems based on my own major, journalism, the experience and knowledge from one of my friends whose major is psychology can give me an unexpected inspiration. Without so much experience shared with other friends, my ordinary life will become tedious and my academic performance will be dull.


Another reason why I incline to choose friends who are different from myself is because these friends can help me adapt to our society more easily. It is widely acknowledged that the society consists of different people. The different personalities, interests and habits reflected from our friends can make me recognize the diversity of society more clearly.


On the other hand, the friends who are similar to ourselves can make us feel more happy and comfortable because of the same inclination, value and personalities. For example, my roommate and I are both the soccer fans. Hence, we will be very happy when we watch the games together.


In conclusion, both of the kinds of friends are important to all of us. Of course, it is more  important for me to make friends who are different from myself as many as possible.


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沙发
发表于 2005-8-8 21:15:00 | 只看该作者
【发贴必读】--TWE标题格式说明!请不要省掉0,不要增加空格或者横线,谢谢!

TWE作文练习以TWE185的题目为准(资料指南和下载区均有下载)。
为了便于搜索,方便考友参考作文思路、理由,有效的使用已有的资源,并且对先来后至的作文练习有个比较,也方便版主管理CD原创范文。大家发出作文练习修改贴时,请在标题中使用统一的关键词格式,突出作文题编号:

******(标题)TWE******表示185 的统一编号。)


例如: [求助]偶在挤牙膏, TWE161

或者简单表述:TWE180


如果是个位十位的标题, 写成: TWE001; TWE019


恳请不要省略标题里面的0,


因为用单独的一个字符1是搜索不到的,


必须两个字符以上才能搜索。



同时: TWE-001和TWE001是不同的


请不要用横线或者空格, 有没有横线和空格的搜索结果也是不同的。



在正文里面, 恳请朋友们贴出完整题目, 方便大家探讨


所以恳请大家配合一下, 方便自己,方便后人。


恳请不要使用其他格式,谢谢

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板凳
发表于 2005-8-9 22:56:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用yemiao在2005-8-8 18:20:00的发言:

There is nothing more important than friends in our life. Making friends who are similar to or different from ourselves is indispensable for everyone. Both of the kinds of friends have obvious advantages. The friends who are similar to ourselves could bring us more pleasure while the other kind of friend could share more experience with us.


As far as I am concerned, the friends who are different from myself is more suitable to me. (观点最好放在开头)There are a number of reasons as to why this is the case. First of all, there are more opportunities to obtain the useful experience of different fields from the friends who are different to(from) myself. For example, when I was obsessed with some problems based on (??)my own major, journalism, the experience and knowledge from one of my friends whose major is psychology can give me an unexpected inspiration. Without so much experience shared with other friends, my ordinary life will become tedious and my academic performance will be dull.


Another reason why I incline to choose friends who are different from myself is because these friends can help me adapt to our society more easily. It is widely acknowledged that the society consists of different people. The different personalities, interests and habits reflected from our friends can make me recognize the diversity of society more clearly. 这段写得好


On the other hand, the friends who are similar to ourselves can make us feel more happy and comfortable because of the same inclination, value and personalities. For example, my roommate and I are both the soccer fans. Hence, we will be very happy when we watch the games together.


In conclusion, both of the kinds of friends are important to all of us. Of course, it is more  important for me to make friends who are different from myself as many as possible.

写得还可以,得5分的希望很大。


地板
发表于 2005-8-9 23:31:00 | 只看该作者
in conclusion you need to restate the three supporting ideas
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